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当你在阅读SCI文章时，是否感觉别人用的词汇，写的句子非常高大上？而再看看自己的，是否有种感觉：好句子都是别人的，自己却low的一逼？当你在写论文时，是否脑海里闪现的除了think, very, some, good…其他的都是问号？是否一句The study shown… 贯穿全文？是否感觉论文虐我千百遍，我写论文好几年？
不要灰心，不要沮丧，材料人教你变身术，让你的文风瞬间变成“高富帅，白富美”。
首先！写第一稿时，你可以暂时用very高，非常good。但是！在写二稿时，就要将一些low的词汇，重复的句型换成你熟悉而又陌生的词汇、句型。替换如下：
1 | about. | regarding; concerning |
2 | always. | invariably |
3 | aspet. | facet; demension; sphere |
4 | attract one's attention. | capture one's attention |
5 | bad 如果bad做表语 可以有be less impressive. | dreadful; unfavorable; poor; adverse; ill |
6 | be against / disagree with sth . | frown on sth |
7 | cause. | give rise to; lead to; result in; trigger |
8 | common . | shared |
9 | communication. | interaction |
10 | complex | sophisticated |
11 | customer. | shopper; client; consumer; purchaser |
12 | dangerous. | perilous ; hazardous |
13 | different | distinctive |
14 | difficult. | formidable; arduous |
15 | famous. | distinguished |
16 | first / second / third. | 第一 in the first place/the first and foremost; 第二 there is one more point, I should touch on, that… ; 第三 the last but not the least |
17 | for example / for instance. | as an example |
18 | get many benefits. | reap huge fruits |
19 | good. | positive, favorable; rosy; promising; perfect; pleasurable; excellent; outstanding; superior |
20 | hardly. | little if anything; little or nothing |
21 | hard-working. | assiduous |
22 | have. | enjoy; possess 注意process是过程的意思。 |
23 | helpful. | beneficial; rewarding |
24 | important. | crucial ; paramount |
25 | in my opinion. | for my part; from my own perspective |
26 | indicate / suggest / fear. | be indicative of; be suggestive of; be fearful of |
27 | many. | an army of; an ocean of; a sea of ; a multitude of ; a host of; if not most |
28 | more and more. | Increasing(ly); growing |
29 | nearly / almost impossible. | next to ; virtually impossible |
30 | necessary. | indispensable |
31 | pay attention to. | pour attention into |
32 | people / persons. | individuals; characters; folks |
33 | poor. | underdeveloped ; financially-challenged |
34 | possible. | feasible |
35 | …reasons for sth. | There are several reasons behind sth |
36 | remember. | bear in mind that |
37 | sb take interest in / sb. be interested in. | sth appeals to sb; sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb |
38 | show. | demonstrate ; manifest |
39 | so. | consequently; accordingly |
40 | some. | a slice of; quiet a few |
41 | thing. | affair, business; matter |
42 | think. | harbor the idea that; take the attitude that; hold the view that; it is widely shared that; it is universally acknowledged that |
43 | typical. | quintessential |
44 | unnecessary / avoidable. | hardly necessary; hardly inevitable… |
45 | very. | overwhelmingly; exceedingly; extremely; intensely |
46 | want. | desire |
不要老用一个观点词，连接词。相同意思，多种句型也会让你的文章与众不同。
通常由数据推断出一定的结论用Results；indicate；infer；suggest；imply that…
最常见的引述别人观点的词汇
（1）不要每次写到研究时总用study，可以用些其它的词汇比如examine, work；
Much of the research in sexual selection in the last two decades has examined how a female’s preference that does not influence her immediate reproductive success can still evolve if it is genetically correlated with another character under direct selection.
（2）在引述别人的观点时，如果不能完全同意，使用state比show更加中立些；
Two hypotheses for female preference evolution—runaway sexual selection and good genes selection—state that preferences evolve indirectly because they are genetically correlated with male traits that are under direct selection; that is, the preferences themselves are not under direct selection.
（3）suggest一种较为客观的引述观点的表达方法；
Studies of receiver biases suggest that such analogies might not be broadly applicable.
（4）argue引用别人观点的表述；
Burley argued that the preference for red beaks is adaptive because it indicates male health, and this preference is then transferred to leg-band color.
（5）根据…
According to the anti-monotony hypothesis, habituation plays an important role in the evolution of complex vocalizations in songbirds: Increased song complexity reduces habituation of neighboring males and courting females.
常见的连接词
However, also, in addition, consequently, afterwards, moreover, Furthermore, further, although, unlike, in contrast, Similarly, Unfortunately, alternatively, parallel results, In order to, despite, For example, Compared with, other results, thus, therefore…
当然，这些词汇只是辅助内容，要想内容丰富，还得脚踏实地的做个科研狗。
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